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| -rw-r--r-- | documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml | 10 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml | 3 |
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml index aeb89024aa..3eb8febefa 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml @@ -2710,10 +2710,10 @@ <title>Trim the Kernel</title> <para> - Kernel is built by including policies for hardware-independent + The kernel is built by including policies for hardware-independent aspects. What subsystems do you enable? - What architecture are you building for? + For what architecture are you building? Which drivers do you build by default. <note>You can modify the kernel source if you want to help with boot time. @@ -2737,7 +2737,7 @@ will be smaller by a relatively constant factor in a compressed kernel image. Look to reduce the areas that are large and taking up around - the "90% rule". + the "90% rule." </para> <para> @@ -2760,7 +2760,7 @@ <para> After figuring out what to eliminate, you need to reconfigure - kernel to reflect those changes during the next build. + the kernel to reflect those changes during the next build. You could run <filename>menuconfig</filename> and make all your changes at once. However, that makes it difficult to see the effects of your @@ -2772,7 +2772,7 @@ fragments into a single configuration file using <filename>merge_config.sh</filename>. The tool makes it easy for you to iterate using the - configuration change/build cycle. + configuration change and build cycle. </para> <para> diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml index 69f0f8d3a2..7aefcfd08d 100644 --- a/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml +++ b/documentation/ref-manual/migration.xml @@ -314,8 +314,7 @@ <link linkend='var-MACHINEOVERRIDES'><filename>MACHINEOVERRIDES</filename></link> or <link linkend='var-DISTROOVERRIDES'><filename>DISTROOVERRIDES</filename></link> variables, as appropriate. - For more changes regarding the - <filename>SRC_URI</filename> variable, see the + For more related changes, see the "<link linkend='migration-1.4-variables'>Variables</link>" section. </para></listitem> |